There are some aspects of this picture that I enjoy. For example, I like the idea of Scootaloo being fatally wounded in battle, and is tragically falling downward. Heck, even the technique has something going for it, like how the sky is lighter towards the top, indicating that the moon is out, and how you drew individual feathers to indicate how injured the Pegasus pony is. However, there are some criticisms I would like to make. First off, I would have her entire left wing behind her back. If she’s falling, then you should have both of them at the same angle. Next, I wouldn’t draw all those lines in her mane and tail. If you look at the original model for Scootaloo, you’ll notice that she has one line though her mane, and two though her tail. You don’t have to add in all these scribbles. The hair would look fine without them. Lastly, I find the blood to be not well animated. For example, the blood on the wing is too transparent. Try making it cloudier. As for the ear, I think there are way too much drops coming from it. If she’s bleeding that much from her ear, then I would only have a few drops bleed from it. But aside from that, I think this piece is decent. Some parts like her actual body and the sky are nicely drawn, and you actually feel for the mare when she gets hurt and begins falling to her doom. It’s definitely a good way to get people interested in your fanfic! Keep up the great work, ZapWBolt!