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For me, what works best is the background. It's blended real smoothly and gives off the warm feel. It also doesn't distract from the ma...


Obviously, what stands out the most in this piece is the lighting and shadowing. Each reflection of light and shadow is illustrated in ...

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One thing I definitely like about this drawing are the implications. Judging by the large pupils in her eyes, it feels like RD is obser...


Well, I must say that this is one of the most bizarre ways to celebrate one hundred watchers. AND I LOVE IT! Firstly, I appreciate how ...

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For me, what works best is the background. It's blended real smoothly and gives off the warm feel. It also doesn't distract from the main subject. Though I must say that the reflection of the Sun extends too far out on the right. Try cropping it so that it's symmetrical on each side. As for the pony, I do admire how you placed the sparkles all throughout the aura to enhance the magical feel. Yet I find it confusing as to why she needs to carry herself across the lake since she has wings. Furthermore, I would try to make sure the front and back legs are evenly sized, and the cutie mark could be just a little smaller. Of course, this isn't a bad drawing. Some of the techincal aspects such as the well-blended background and shine in her mane are pleasing to look at. I'm just compelled to question certain things that don't add up, and the execution could use some improvement. Still, I advise you to keep up the awesome work, SunriseSparkle!

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Gabriel
Artist | Student | Film & Animation
United States
I am an avid writer, critic, and filmmaker. I mostly like to review artwork, which would typically be MLP-related. I also enjoy posting things that are related to award shows, like the Oscars, Grammys, Emmys, and Tonys. Sometimes, I might even create an award show of my own!
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AlisiaLanet Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for adding Azure By Cayfie-daxymvw Resized to your Favorites collection MLP:FIM.
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GJ301 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2017  Student Filmographer
No problem! :D
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AlisiaLanet Featured By Owner May 12, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for adding me to your deviantWATCH and thank you for adding Syra - Just Woke Up to your Favorites.
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GJ301 Featured By Owner May 12, 2017  Student Filmographer
No problem, Alisia! Always glad to favor a Syra picture! 
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AlisiaLanet Featured By Owner May 12, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe ^_^
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RetroGalicia Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
I see you need my help for something, GJ301 .
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GJ301 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Student Filmographer
Indeed I do. And I'm glad you're willing to offer your assistance! :)
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PenguinsN1Fan Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thank you for the watch!
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GJ301 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Student Filmographer
No problem! :)
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Timelord909 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I think i might join ur contest
do i have to draw all of the charcters listed?
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